It is March 15, in the year 2514. The people of former New York are in desperate circumstances. They are being overrun, and they
are losing hope. The banners proclaiming a Free the Real NYC lie in the gutters, trampled by terrified and panicked citizens. Two teens– or kidz, as they are called now– are on their way home from a secret meeting. As they walk in the shadows to avoid detection, they both trip on a huge titanium cylinder. Etched into the surface are a series of scratched-out words. The only words they can make out are, "he will prevail." They drag the heavy cylinder into a hidden alleyway and twist it open. The glow from their flashlights reveals the contents of the cylinder. With gasps of relief, they look at each other with hope in their eyes for the first time in years. Adam and Bridget were walking home one night from a Free the Real NYC meeting. They were walking in the shadows to avoid being caught by the curfew police when they tripped over a huge titanium cylinder. There were three words etched on it that they could read. "He will prevail?", Bridget asked quizzed, "What's that supposed to mean?" Out of curiosity, Adam opened the container. They shone their flashlights at the titanium cylinder as they gasped in awe and relief. It was a news article from December 13, 2505! It was written about how the leader of the formerly NYC was planning to build a machine that could wipe out the entire city! They rushed back to the secret base of the Free the Real NYC resistance. They put the container on the table. Now that it was in better lighting, they could read the rest of the etchings. They read ψοφώ, Greek for "I'm dying." They learn that the etching was written by the founder of the resistance, Henry Gihigal. He wrote it when the leader of the Cultists, Tabea Thomas, was torturing him with methods unheard of. He wrote the "He will prevail" section speaking of the resistance. The "ψοφώ" was to tell the resistance to choose a new leader. They started planning their attack to make sure that the machine was destroyed.
Using the ideas you previously wrote in your Narrative Organization Chart and your introduction (exposition), you will write the middle (rising action and climax) of your narrative story.
Important note: You will submit your introduction and middle for this assignment.
View the grading rubric as you complete your work. This is your guide to a super submission.
Review the ideas you wrote in your Narrative Organization Chart and your introduction.
Include your introduction paragraph with your middle paragraphs.
Using ideas from your chart, write the middle of your narrative: the rising action and climax.
Make sure you include:
two sensory descriptions
dialogue
two events
the climax event
Write 300 words or more in the middle of your story and write in the third person point of view.
Save your work to your computer or drive.
Submit your work in 03.07 The Middle of Your Story.
(I already did the first part i just need someone to do the middle for me also read the paragraph to get a full understanding and reading the questions as you do your paragraph if you want to you can also do another paragraph 75 words or more to finish it off.)
The cylinder seem to be stuck a little on the ground so the kidz ran around like headless chickens, looking for something to set the world saving item free. The kidz heard stories from back in the day where kids where playing outside and enjoying their childhood. It made them furious knowing that they had to live in fear for their life everyday...so they had to get the cylinder unstuck. One kid had realized that he kept a hunting knife on him, so he pull it out and tarted to cut away the tar that was keeping the cylinder captive. To no prevail he couldn't get it free. When he looked up his friend was gone, like she vanished out of thin air, so he started to quietly call her name so he would make less commotion. She answered back in the same hushed tone, and the worry from his mind was immediately gone. The girl came back with all types of trash that had been thrown around, broken glass, sharp, plastic, and metal scrapes. The kidz worked their hardest to get the cylinder free, and they FINALLY GOT IT!! The were so ecstatic that they had gotten the symbol of hope free. Now to get it to a place where the symbol would be use full. The government had given up on the chaotic world..but they still worked because they still got payed, so the kidz thought and came up with the idea of handing it over to the government. Then maybe it will give them hope too to start running the world again. The kidz went home to their parents and gave them the cylinder. The shocked faces on them, then the tears that started to fall was a sign that everything was going to be okay.
