I think it's called a serenade
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
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1. Luca and the chickens.
2. The chickens said "Cluck, cluck, cluck!"
Answer:
if you are look ing for cause and effect this is for you
Explanation:
the car was in a reck and that is the cause the effect is the officer came to the car to make sure no one was hurt
Answer: I disagree because you nose is not your only sense you still have your eyes and hands and your other senses.
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