What is the prompt of the essay?
Essentially a thesis statement should state your opinion/the main idea of your essay. If a thesis is a question, it is no longer a statement.
Depending on what you will be writing about here are some alternatives that are close to your original thesis:
Social media has negative/positive effects on young adults. (discuss positive or negative effects)
Social media can affect young adults in a variety of ways. (discuss both positive and negative effects)
Young adults are affected by social media in many positive/negative ways. (discuss positive or negative effects)
Answer:
Believe in yourself instead of conforming to the values of others.
Explanation:
Philosopher Ralph Waldo Emerson in his essay "Self Reliance" argue about the effect of polite society on an individual's personal growth. Only self sufficiency is capable of providing freedom to an individual in discovering their true self and worth, bringing forth true independence on the individual.
He emphasized on the importance of an individual to follow their own voices rather than trying to conform to the dictates and values set by the society. He posits the issue of self reliance in oneself and the importance of the imaginary thinking capacity of an individual. He also argues that the most important realization for an individual is trusting himself. He promotes self reliance as an ideal virtue for everyone. "Believe in yourself instead of conforming to the values of others" best sums up the passage provided in the question.
Dangling modifier -- it should be modifying the subject (I) instead it is near the Buildings which are actually the "object" of the verb appeared (though, in truth, appeared doesn't take an object -- B
The women has something to cell or she just opened for business