For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
When the boys start to boo louder, they dismiss the power of the conch, effectively symbolizing their dismissal of a civil society. "The rock struck Piggy a glancing blow from chin to knee; the conch exploded into a thousand white fragments and ceased to exist." (Golding 181) This quote describes Piggy's death.
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Ralph and Simon are working to build a series of shelters when Jack returns to the beach.
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They take the form of a long narrative poem about a quest, told in formal, elevated language
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i think thats right
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In the poem, Bob Kaufman has made the suffering of the urban poor personal to him as well as to his readers.
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Poet of ''Unanimity Has Been Achieved, Not a Dot Less for Its Accidentalness," is Bob Kaufman. It explains the concept of social inequality as per someone who is at the lowest level of society. According to him, people have stopped caring about the poor and needy. In this poem, he has made the suffering of the urban poor personal to him as well as to his readers.
