A lot of descriptive imagery, excellent setting and sophisticated language. Use of punctuation is varied and concise which effectively engages the readers to continue reading.
One problem is sentence length. No examiner wants to mark your exam and immediately get hit in the face with a chunk of words. Separate your paragraphs individually.
First off do you mean the game tetris? If so here is the answer:
Tetra is a prefix which means “four” and is used when forming compound words. In tetris, we use pieces (called tetrominos), which are formed by combining 4 small blocks (called minos). There are 7 possible types of tetrominos named after the letters that they resemble: I, O, L, J, T, S, and Z.
Excellent.
Things to fix (mostly syntax):
- Cool right. -> Cool, right? (as a question)
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