Write about each topic one at a time. Be sure to not intermix two separate ideas in order to maintain clarity throughout. Do your best to stay on task and not get distracted or go off on unneeded tangents. I would also suggest to separate each topic/idea into its own paragraph indenting each time. That's my advice on keeping your prose writing clear and concise. Hope this helps!
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It's b I think but if I'm wrong my b
People have money but rich people have more money than alot of other people
<span>The language of the Anglo-Saxons (up to about 1150), a highly inflected language with a largely Germanic vocabulary, very different from modern English.</span>
I'd choose this dialogue to revise your sentence:
<span>“Did you hear?” I asked them. “My painting got selected! Exciting, right?” I smiled. “Especially given that I felt so incompetent at the beginning and that the competition was ruthless!”
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It feels like the option that best uses the dialogue to improve this sentence, because the other options are either too informal or just the same sentence as the original one.
