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Dear Diary,
i don't like it, i want it to stop! just because my hair is pure white for unknown reasons, everybody looks at me and me, i don't even have any friends unlike i did in primary school. Its not fair! everyone else is so pretty and perfect... then theres me... Kate 'white hag' Greteen.
From Kate Greteen.
i literally wrote this in 2 minutes so ya know
To improve a conclusion, a writer must bare in mind that it should not address a new topic, that is to say, it has to be a recompilation of the topics already mentioned and developed in the paragraphs, so it has to be a kind of "summary", an overall of the topics and ideas discussed. It should be concise and the reader needs to be know it is the conclusion and you are not going to keep on working on the ideas, so sometimes, it is necessary to include the words "to conclude"/ "to round up"/ "in conclusion" or something similar on order to let the reader know you are about to finish.
The answer is the first one. it gives u a hint because he THOUGHT he saw something and a phantasm is something you see in your mind.
All the other sentences use the word incorrectly
