I believe falling in love is a subconscious thing. The more and more you spend time with someone the more and more you realize you seem attracted to that person. It's kind of like discovering your favorite song. The more and more you listen to it the more you fall in love with it. You don't choose who you love, love chooses for you. Like cupid, it kinda just strikes, without warning. That's love, it inexplicably just feels right.
I believe that It is C, because although the passage does focus on Mathilde's love for expensive things, broadly the subject is how Mathilde is discontent with the lifestyle she is now living, and D is too broad, and B is also too broad.
1. Pellucidity
Intricate words and syntax are an obstruction to pellucidity and should be evaded. Conceptions should be limpidly distributed between sentences and paragraphs.
Example: Albeit I have never been to the races afore, I was very exhilarated to behold them, yet withal remotely nervous, because of the type of people who go there.
Amended: I’d never been to a horse race. I was exhilarated to go, but withal a little nervous, since I wasn’t sure about the people at the track.
2. Don’t describe each and every one of your own forms of kineticism
Example: As I went in the door, I turned and visually perceived a TV. I looked around and visually perceived posters on the wall.
As I went further in I descried everyone was optically canvassing M*A*S*H.
Ameliorated: I immediately descried the posters on the wall, though everyone else’s ocular perceivers were fixated on a TV playing M*A*S*H.
3. Evade the second-person narrative
A consequential part of the narrative essay is the fact that the inditer experienced the events described.
Example: As you go in the door, you will turn and visually perceive a TV. You look around and visually perceive posters on the wall.
As you go further in you descry everyone is optically canvassing M*A*S*H.
Inditing in the present tense is okay, however.
4. To interest the reader, dynamic word cull is key
Evade sounding too clinical. Utilize the same slang, idiom, and turns of phrase you would utilize in verbalization. Eschew passive constructions.
Example: I am presented an array of unpleasant photos in which many casualties are shown after automobile accidents.
Ameliorated: They showed me a book stuffed with gruesome pictures of people who’d been in car wrecks.
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1. <u>B) One of the benefits of the rain barrel is that it holds that first bit off rain that's coming off your roof or driveway and prevents it from running into streams and causing erosion from high flows of water.</u>
2. <u>A) I use it to fill my fish tank, even to wash the car if you want to.</u>
3. <u>A) It suggests that water is wasted when it runs into drains and sewers.</u>
To persuade because it’s convincing you to get whatever you “need”
