Answer:
It looks like it is going to rain today there are a lot of clouds in the sky the sun is not shining i will play inside if it rains
Explanation:
Condense your writing and only keep the most important ideas. Also add punctuation.
<u>Same sentence + punctuation:</u>
- It looks like it is going to rain today, there are a lot of clouds in the sky and the sun is not shining. I will play inside if it rains.
<u>Other </u><u>ideas</u><u>:</u>
- The cloudy sky makes it look like it's going to rain today, which means I'll have to play inside.
- The sun is hiding behind the clouds and I think it might rain soon, which means I will have to play inside.
- The cloudy sky threatens rain; I will have to play inside if it begins to rain.
(I think you should use a semicolon (;) in the last sentence, not a colon (:) but I may be wrong)
Atticus explained in a way that the children will understand it. He thinks that the children convinced Mr. Cunningham that Atticus is an innoccent person who stands up to the Tom Robinson case. I think Atticus is wrong because the children are like defending him from the danger he's about to get in. His understand of a mob is realistic.
I read this book recently and I know it's correct. Hope this helps!
