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Answer:</h3>
Correct formal email:
Hello Dr. Jones,
Many of the students at my school are interested in learning more about improving their health. However, at this time, our school only offers one semester of health class. Our student council decided it would be a good idea to bring in experts, such as you, as part of a lecture series on maintaining physical fitness. If you would like to participate, please contact me within the next month.
Sincerely yours,
Joey
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Explanation:</h3>
First mistake correction: When saying 'hello', you must not use a hyphen (-) or em dash (—
). Instead, you put a comma and then continue with the rest of the email after a line space.
Second mistake correction: When saying the regards, or 'sincerely yours', you can't use a colon (:) after it. You have to, again, use a comma after, go to the next line, and then put in your name. You should preferably use the full name however. You can see what I mean in the corrected email above.
Note: It is recommended to use 'dear' in place of 'hello' in a formal email.
I hope this helps! :)
-Bella
<em>BrainlyBluebell</em>
Make it interesting, and make sure it's on topic the whole time, don't get off topic and be descriptive! Stuff like that so it'll make the reader want to read it more. :) hope this helpes!
I would say (b) because this answer is the most focused. It's also a topic which would easily fit in a five paragraph essay, while the others would most likely require extensive research and would only fit in an at least ten page paper.
Answer:
D. The great man theory
Explanation:
we went over this a while back, so im not 100% sure its right, be cautious
Storage of food was important.
Wine and meat needed to be stored apart.
Most yeomen had vats and presses to make cheese