A sentence: Given to much homework kids will be stressed and can cause their grades to go down. I will continue
she thinks " we take the same medicine"
or
"we take the same medicine" I thought
hope you get it right coz I'm not sure if it is correct
but still hope I helped
Would it not be a coral reaf? Home to hundreds of fish and under water plants?
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
Hey there,
Answer:
As I was calling my friend and leaving a message the phone went dead.
Hope this helps :D
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