Answer:
is this a question or free points??
Explanation:
You translate the passage to you're own native language
I don't know a lot about papers but for examples, the sentence that says "Then after Lily died, he stepped over James dead body and left her traumatized son in his crib and just clutched Lily’s dead body."
The word JAMES should have an apostrophe.
James's
"Severus Snape is not a good person and Harry really needs to rename his child. "
Instead of saying good try something like "pleasurable" or "delightful"
"He laughed at her joke" would be a full sentence.
Because it's a complete thought.
I feel like 3rd one because when you want to have those job they want to know ur reasons why you are interested to this subject