In The Deserted Village, the villagers are driven from their homes because they have enabled a wealthy landowner to buy the public property. with an Enclosure Acts.
In the deserted village, the poet says that the villagers will either go to America or corrupted or crowded charity homes. Which is true according to them
Answer:
The independent clause can stand by itself as a sentence. thats why its called independent.
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
