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bulgar [2K]
3 years ago
12

Anyone bored enough to proofread my essay? (part 2)

English
2 answers:
rewona [7]3 years ago
8 0
It is honestly a very good essay
Marianna [84]3 years ago
4 0
Maybe in that first part change "Babble.com cites that", to "Babble.com states that, one reason for dads staying home...". It flows smoothly as opposed to "cites that". Citing is giving credit to a source and that is not what they are doing. Something I like to remember is 'I cite, they state'.
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