Question

Help I need a concluding sentence for my conclusion this is what i have so far: in conclusion we discovered that lamp oil has the most surface tension and polarity. We could fit the most drops of lamp oil on the penny without the bubble breaking. 34 drops was the maximum amount of drops we got. Lamp oil is a very polar substance

Answer 1

I personally, would remove " Lamp oil is a very polar substance " And replace it with what the article you wrote, was about. For example, lets say you wrote about why people love ice cream, you could have the ending sentence say. " And that's why I wrote about why people love ice cream" Or something along those lines. I'd write a few more facts about it first,  don't just have one sentence saying a fact without any supporting detail, hope this helps! :)