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This is our essay. Please help me because this is my major grade and we don't know if this is right. Please... (Rewrite the questions please)
Adrian, De'Mera, Kaydence, Lucy, Luke

Mrs. Arrington

English Sixth

November 15, 2018

Love Letters during World War 2

Did you know that soldiers from World War 2 wrote love letters during the war? The way these letters were sent to others are surprising. How the letter looked like is also something to explore. People today enjoy reading examples of old love letter sent during the war. Love letters during war time brought families and loved one closer together when they were far apart.

Once a month the soldiers had to write or send their letter to there love, family, and others. Some of the soldiers wrote a letter to a person that is not in this world anymore. After done writing the letters they collect everyone's and then they bring it to the boss. The boss will read it and if it is something about the War he (during World War 2, no women was allowed to work) trash the letter. In someway trashing letter can hurt somebody’s feeling, but we also think it was a good way not telling the result of the War to the country.

“A love letter is a romantic way to express feelings of love in written form. Whether delivered by hand, mail, carrier pigeon, or romantically left in a secret location, the letter may be anything from a short and simple message of love to a lengthy explanation of feelings.” This is what a love letter is and how you would make it.

“Things look pretty bleak here this morning both temporally and politically. What has happened to the S.U.? Is this non-aggression pact with Germany true. Everyone here is very excited, I- told-you-not-to-trust-the-B,Bolishies sort of thing and I don’t know what to think or say. Leave seems doubtful now so don’t buy any tickets as many as I may not be allowed to lea england. Oh David, I can’t stay down here indefinitely as people seem to think we will. I will try to come up for the weekend anyway to talk the whole thing over you.” This is one of the love letters during world war 2. What did you feel when you read this letter? Did you feel sad?, or did you feel the love of the women?

I hope we have answered all of the questions that y'all have about love letters. All love letters are different and have a lot of writing so have not a lot of writing. If you look at a love letter from world war 2 and a letter now they will look really different and shorter.

This is the end of our essay. Please look out for grammer mistakes. And others tooooooo

Answer 1

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