I like the poem. it's very honest and personal. if you actually feel that way I'm sorry. no one should ever have to feel like that. don't let the bad outweigh all the good. and I think you should title it "dark rain cloud" or "I'm fine" cause alot of people say I'm fine when they aren't. idk hope this helped
Just say yeah and Jk. Rowling isn't an author because she doesn't write realisticly
