Answer: The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas
Explanation:
From the summary given above, there's no connection in the revision made. There isn't any transition from the words given. The ideas aren't connected at all.
Therefore should have been a connection between how jealous the neighboring hunters wee of Neiterkob and Enkai relationship, what they did to show their vengeance and so on.
With regards to the summary given in the question, it lacks transitions that connect ideas.
Answer:
A. the way a story's conflict is resolved
Explanation:
It's to show an exception (which is often the purpose of "yet") because in the first clause it identifies an action, then then it's like "but wait, maybe the action didn't really get going" in the second half of the sentence
Answer:
Intro paragraph:
Hook
Essential information to understand topic
Thesis
Body paragraphs:
Topic sentence relating to thesis
Evidence
Reasoning/Prove it’s relevant
2 Evidence
Reasoning
Concluding sentence to help transition to next paragraph
Conclusion paragraph
Rephrase thesis to state your argument again
Universal statement (something reader can relate to)
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The sources begin to state your main idea instead of supporting it. APEX :)</span>