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After the mistress stopped teaching him, he already knew the alphabet. He made friends with all the little white boys whom he met on the street, and took a book with him on every errand.He traded a bread in return for a lesson of education
An agent went rogue once an enemey killed his fam.
Answer:
The incorrect word used in this sentence is A.) While at the lake, we went ((boding.))
Explanation:
The word in this sentence is misspelled and should be re-spelled to <u>boating</u>.
I hope this helps! ^-^
Answer: Many of the tests were rigged so that the registrars could give potential voters an easy or a difficult version, and could score then differently as well.
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Answer:
If you want the honest feedback, I got you. I was really good, but I have a few suggestions to make it sound more "official":
- Italicize sounds (i.e. change "Thud!" to <em>Thud. </em>in the second paragraph)
- Make sure formatting is reasonable and consistent: "1 month later" is too big, the title should be bigger and "Beanbag" is incorrect (it's bean bag)
- Suspense would work very well in this story. I wouldn't reveal who the speaker is until the last paragraph or even last sentence. To do this, you can touch more on the emotional aspects of this story in the introduction and body paragraphs (no naming names, places, things, etc.) Make it abstract as you can to build up to the answers: Who is talking? What happened to them? Why do they feel this way? Things like that.
- Stop being so repetitive with words like "demon" (maybe substitute for "little devil" or "menace")
- I see the humorous aspect of this story, but I would make sure to not include too many spelling and grammar mistakes.
Sorry if my suggestions are a little too intense, but I can tell you are a good writer and can easily improve in these areas! Please let me know if this helps!
