The revision that would help expand the ideas in the excerpt
above would be adding more specifics about the sailors' beliefs about the
island.
To add, the Most Dangerous Game opens with a conversation
between two men—Whitney and
Rainsford.
Answer:
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Explanation:
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<span>The writing is choppy.
I believe this is the answer. If the writing was connected, sentences would already be combined. Varied writing and lengthy writing usually has nothing to do with sentence combination.</span>
The highlighted part of the sentence is called a/an Professor Plum , who had been to the mansion before , expertly navigated the maze of rooms andcorridors to quickly reach the conservatory
I think this is what you are wanting to know. You would use a not an If the word/name (Professor Plum) would have been something starting with a vowel instead, you would use an
Is this what you were asking?
