Answer:
Use different types of sentences.
Use several types of sentences instead of just one or two
Use different punctuation to emphasize mood.
Get a grammar manual. It is useful to have a thorough reference book nearby that you can consult when writing
Explanation:
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The girl is sad about dying so she talks to her brother one last time and tells him to remember the good things she did.
Hello. You did not enter the text to which this question refers, which makes it impossible for this question to be answered satisfactorily and efficiently. However, I can try to help you by showing you what a dilemma is and thus making it easier for you to find Tom's dilemma in the text you have.
A dilemma is a problem that has two solutions, but the two solutions are contradictory, the two have bad and unsatisfactory results, but it is necessary for Tom to decide and choose one of these solutions, even if that does not make him happy.