<span>If I like it:
Yes, I like this poem. It seems/feels so intimate, yet somehow I feel connected to the character.
What emotions are there:
I believe the emotions a reader would feel would be sorrow, pity, despair, grief and helplessness because he/she has no power to help the abused.
What I would add to make it better:
I probably wouldn't, perhaps start posting it publicly to sites like 'Wattpad', to get a wider perspective from public comments.</span>
Izeah was my College best friend who I was able to confide in for any problems. He was the only person I really felt I had a true connection with considering that I have very few friends and so did he. I learned to love Isaias in a matter of weeks as something more than a friend, I considered him a brother. I myself have an older brother but he doesn’t love me or my dad which is something that has taken a deep scar within my heart. Izeah and me got along very well and for some time I told him that I was studying the Bible with Jehovah Witness and that I planned to become one soon. Nothing between him and me changed, I still kept in contact with him because I cared much for him. Then, one day I got a text from him saying that he didn’t want to be my friend anymore; those words hit me very deeply. I was very sad and hurt. He said to me that my new religion was something he wasn’t used to and wanted to part ways. I wanted to ask him if he wanted to work things out but I decided not to answer and left things just the way they were because if he were truly my friend he wouldn’t put conditions to our friendship. For many weeks I got depressed. Loosing his friendship was like having a dagger trespass my heart. Till today I still miss Izeah and I sometimes feel sad because he distanced himself from me. However, I am much happier today then I was two years ago when Izeah was still my friend because I confided inside Jehovah and I have friends today that love me, care for me and console me when I most need it.
Hope this helps, call out for me if you need anything else :D
Answer:
Why do the first two sentences contain qualifiers (“oddly enough,” “however”)?. Ellison is floating some theories here, an activity he has invited the reader to join.
Explanation:
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