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Correct formal email:
Hello Dr. Jones,
Many of the students at my school are interested in learning more about improving their health. However, at this time, our school only offers one semester of health class. Our student council decided it would be a good idea to bring in experts, such as you, as part of a lecture series on maintaining physical fitness. If you would like to participate, please contact me within the next month.
Sincerely yours,
Joey
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First mistake correction: When saying 'hello', you must not use a hyphen (-) or em dash (—
). Instead, you put a comma and then continue with the rest of the email after a line space.
Second mistake correction: When saying the regards, or 'sincerely yours', you can't use a colon (:) after it. You have to, again, use a comma after, go to the next line, and then put in your name. You should preferably use the full name however. You can see what I mean in the corrected email above.
Note: It is recommended to use 'dear' in place of 'hello' in a formal email.
I hope this helps! :)
-Bella
<em>BrainlyBluebell</em>
They prefer to work alone, this doesn’t say anything about learning.
They are different from oggy
Summary. Walden is an account of the two years during which Henry David Thoreau built his own cabin, raised his own food, and lived a life of simplicity in the woods near Concord, Massachusetts. Thoreau's idea was that one's true self could be lost amid the distractions of ordinary life. Thoreau's attitude toward reform involved his transcendental efforts to live a spiritually meaningful life in nature. As a transcendentalist, Thoreau believed that reality existed only in the spiritual world, and the solution to people's problems was the free development of emotions ("Transcendentalism").
