The verb tenses shifted. It should be:
By the time we got to Austin, the puppy had fallen asleep in the back of the van.
Instead, you could write, “They went and made their favorite foods the the upcoming party.”
Martha reprimands her daughter for getting a bad grade after she didn't study.
Lucas was surveying the grade on what their favorite sport was.
I reluctantly did my chores even though I didn't want to.
Uncle Tom was a jovial person but could lose his temper if someone called him old.
After I didn't watch the dog like I was told, mom scolded me for not paying attention to the muddy pawprints tracked around the house.
Jackson grabbed his golfing paraphernalia out of the golf cart.
The last time we visited, Gerald's house was even shabbier than it was now.
Lee Anne was overwhelmed enough by school so she had done her homework perfunctorily.
Hope this helped!!!
Jenny, from Durham, has been an apprentice accountant for two years.
She said, “It’s an excellent way to gain confidence, new skills and friends.”
(Depending on your teacher, you can put a comma between “skills” and “friends.”)
