Answer 1

Answer:

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Answer 2

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However, it is not only the hotel's location that makes staying here a pleasant experience. Free Wifi makes getting online a piece of cake, whilst every room is en-suite and comes complete with a lockable safe for your valuables and possessions. Although we are located within easy reach of the city's major tourist attractions, the area surrounding us is actually one of the quietest sections.

Explanation:

However(,) it is not only the hotel's location that makes staying here a pleasant experience. Free Wifi makes getting online a piece of cake, whilst every room is en-suite and comes complete with a lockable safe() for your valuables() and possessions. Although() we are located within easy reach of the city's major tourist attractions, the area surrounding us is actually one of the quietest sections.

There are three changes in the sentence. First is the addition of comma after however, then the commas after safe, valuables and although are removed.