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Alja [10]
3 years ago
12

How could this excerpt from an essay best be revised to clarify meaning and enhance style

English
2 answers:
Maslowich3 years ago
8 0
A

Your topic sentence needs to be the last sentence of the first paragraph and the last sentence here is not talking about the whole topic
malfutka [58]3 years ago
6 0

Answer:

D. use evidence that supports the topic more clearly

Explanation:

There is little to no evidence in this article

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