Prewriting is a good practice. Writing it out is another one. Not a good practice is not knowing what your going to write about
Answer:
The best way to revise the sentence is:
D. To raise money for uniforms, members of the volleyball team will hold a car wash on Saturday.
Explanation:
<u>The original sentence is not really defective, it is only missing a piece of information concerning when the car wash will be held. The best way to add it is to include it at the end of the sentence, as is done in letter D. To raise money for uniforms, members of the volleyball team will hold a car wash on Saturday.</u>
Let's take a look at the other options to understand why they are not usable.
Letter A does begin with the subject of the sentence, but interrupts it with extra information, preventing the sentence from being a direct one. It sounds really confusing. Letter B adds the "on Saturday" information at a strange place, also interrupting the direct flow of the sentence. Letter C puts the "on Saturday" information right at the beginning. It's not that this can't be done. But, in this case, a comma should be added after it. Nevertheless, it makes the introduction of the sentence too long, which is not a good thing.
Answer:
She depends on Romeo and dreads life without him.
Explanation:
Well think about it, Benvolio and Mercutio are Romeo's best friends. They are worried about him, because firstly he is in love with Rosaline - this love in unrequited. This makes Romeo very depressed for a long period of time. So, of course they are worried about him. Also, after Capulet's party, Romeo mysteriously disappears, which leaves both Mercutio and Benvolio worried for him. As well as the fact that Tybalt discovered that Romeo had gatecrashed the party and now is looking for vengeance. Hope this helped.
Dear sir or ma'am, (if a name is given use a name) or just begin with Hello,
I received an overdue notice about ___________(book) but I know I returned the book to you on _____ (date) because I have a receipt of return with that book listed on it.
I hope this will clear up any confusion and they charge will be removed from my account
Thank you,
(Your name)
