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Sedbober [7]
2 years ago
5

MARKING BRAINLIEST: Ok so I just need some help on a little sentence I wrote. Its my friend (josh) speaking to me about a party.

I just need to know if the punctuation for this sentence is correct or I should split it into 2 sentences and if I have to explain how.
BELOW:
"Oh yea," Josh says, "I forgot to mention i'm throwing a little gathering with some people you and I know, so get comfortable because tonight is going to be one hell of a night."
English
2 answers:
maxonik [38]2 years ago
8 0

Answer:

Overall, this looks great, but there are a few minor errors that can easily be fixed. I'll fix some problems with the bold and <em>italic</em> fonts:

Explanation:

Original text: "Oh <em>yea</em>," Josh says<em>,</em> "I forgot to mention <em>i'm</em> throwing a little gathering with some people you and I know, so get comfortable because tonight is going to be one hell of a night."

The word "<em>yea</em>," is usually spelled like this in an informal text, but if you are writing a story/essay, use the correct form of this word as, "<em>Yeah."</em>

Also, after your quoted text, you write, <em>"Josh says,..." </em>and for this, you would need to replace the comma (,) with a period (.) because these are two separate independent sentences. So it would be, "<em>Josh says." </em>

And then, in the second sentence, you need to capitalize, "<em>i'm</em>," since it is a proper noun that the subject is using. So, it would be, "<em>I'm</em>."

And, if needed, you can split the second quotation text into two sentences by replacing the comma beside the word, "<em>know</em>," with a period, and then you should capitalize and add a comma beside to the word, "<em>so,"</em> since it is the beginning of a new sentence. But, if you want, you can keep it as it is.

<u>So, your text should be written as the following:</u>

"Oh <em>yeah</em>," Josh says<em>.</em> "I forgot to mention <em>I'm</em> throwing a little gathering with some people you and I know<em>. So,</em> get comfortable because tonight is going to be one hell of a night."

I hope this improves your work. Let me know if all goes well! :D

Leto [7]2 years ago
3 0

Answer:

Its looks fine as is, I would just change it to "Oh yea." Josh says, ect.

Or you could say "oh yea." Josh says, "I forgot to mention that throwing a little gathering with some people you and I know." Put something here about what 'Josh' is doing (he looks at you, he looks away, ect.) "You better get comfortable because tonight is going to be one hell of a night."  

Explanation:

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