“His hands ar like vises” means Strong and steady
It should be Billy Cobham is a talented, respected fusion drummer, and he was born in Panama. Sorry if this is incorrect.
Know you audience and tailor your writing to them. This will help them relate or "see" what you're writing.
If you are telling a story to young children, use simple words and be descriptive and enthusiastic.
If you are writing to impress a college admitter, use complex words and formal diction.
If you are writing for a religious audience, maybe write a sermon0type passage and include religion in your writing.
