-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
Answer:
In "Night," the author Elie Wiesel sees a son killing his own father for bread. However, even though Elie would never do the same, the inhuman conditions he was living in have made him thought about it. In fact, after they are sent to the blocks, Elie treats his father like a burden. The reason is that Elie has to care for his father, but Elie is so weak that he feels like giving up. As a result, Elie's internal conflict has to do with how much energy he should devote to his father, and whether he should get him his rations.
Answer:
One word to describe this chapter would be revenge/ harassment (one of these if you wanna choose) because Bob Ewell begins to harass different people in the town because he is mad that Atticus took the job that Ewell wanted so this chapter is all about how Ewell takes his anger out on other people who were connected with the case before and holds a grudge against them
Explanation:
One part of the chapter that surprised me was when Bob Ewell attacks Jem and Scout on their way home in the dark. This chapter shocked me because attacking children is a horrible crime with a huge price to pay and for him willing to do that is crazy. (but in the end Boo kills Ewell) I hope this is still helpful.
The first answer is A
the second answer is A
the third answer is either B or D
