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According to Dr. Jones, Prof. of marine biology at Florida International University in Miami, famous orcas like Keiko—the whale in the movie "Free Willy" who was successfully released back into the wild—have helped raise public awareness about the inhumane capture and treatment of these sea animals. In the past 40 years, a number of organizations, including the Free Willy Keiko foundation and the Humane Society, have taken important steps to stop the capture of orcas in the waters surrounding the U.S. Progress to stop inhuman capture and captivity throughout the world continues.
correct grammar
Explanation:
According to Dr. Jones, Prof. of marine biology at <u>Fla.</u> International <u>university</u> in <u>miami,</u> <u>Famous Orcas</u> like Ketiko -the whale in the movie "Free Willy" who was successfully released back into the <u>wild-have</u> helped raise public awareness about the inhumane capture and <u>treatm-ent </u>of these sea animals. In the past 40 years, a number of organizations, including the Free Willy Keiko foundation and the <u>humane society</u> have taken important steps to stop the capture of <u>Orcas</u> in the waters surrounding the U.S. Progress to stop inhuman capture and captivity throughout the world continues.
Errors in bold
The usage of at is the error
Explanation:
IN is for large spaces that can enclose (village, city, state, province, country, continent, mountain range, desert, zone, etc.)
ON is for surfaces.( street/avenue/road, most bodies of water, etc)
AT is for points ( We live at an address, at a certain point and at a certain person’s residence if just the possessive case is used to mean the residence.)
Examples:
1- I live in Belgrade.
2-They live on Mulberry Street
3-I live at 199 Main Street
Conclusion: AT is a tiny point, ON is bigger, and IN is big enough to surround you.
The words are used to show quick, straight actions, they are scattered about so that the reader has the impression that the scene is impactful as the excerpt "I was struck by the intimacy scene." shows. There is also the idea that only the ones engaged in the conversations are allowed to hear their content and finally, these people are free from their masters -- teachers, parents and any other adult that symbolizes authority.
Past
The possibility to change the plan was past.
