Locate the individual statements or major idea units in the original. Change the order of ideas, maintaining the logical connections among them. Substitute synonyms for words in the original, making sure the language in your paraphrase is appropriate for your audience. Combine and divide sentences as necessary.
Her voice was probably very flexible (keep in mind dancing), her voice was very pretty (keep in mind the twinkle) and her voice probably loses focus really fast (keep in mind wandered)
