You would highlight burns against them and the fire is made ready, the furnace is now hot, ready to receive them, the flames do now rage and glow.
You would highlight those things because God's wrath is being personified as, or compared to, a fire, as revealed in the line the wrath of God burns against them. The fire is made ready... seems like an extended metaphor.
It's missing one set of quotation marks. when someone is speaking. what he or she says should be quoted in quotation marks. That is where the whole idea of a quote comes from. Hope it helps...
<span>The first point is Exposition, which introduces the story. The second point is Inciting Incident, which presents a problem for the characters. The third point is Rising Action, where characters take action to find a resolution. The fourth point is Climax, where the story comes to a head. The fifth point is Falling Action, where characters react to the resolution of the problem. The sixth point is Conclusion, which resolves the remaining plot.</span>