Well, one thing I know is that his name is one of the apostles of the bible, (Simon)
Simon likes to meditate and he feels kindered spirit with animals. His personality also fits this scripture: Matthew 19:14
Now two accounts of him being kind:
1. When piggy loses his glasses, he is the one to pick them up and give them back
2. He helps the little kids pick fruit and shares his food.
I don't know the page numbers by heart, but this is the most I remember.
I would say yes.
This is because of the name itself -- a "group" project. It's not a "solo" or an "alone" project. You are responsible for the other people's work in your group. It is important to make sure everyone contributes their own work in a group project, and not someone else's.
Best of luck
The tense is all mixed up, but it looks like present is used most often, so "emitted" should be changed to "emits" and "pulled" should be changed to "pulls." I can't see the entire paragraph so just make sure that's consistent.
You don't need a comma in "running towards us with the fire extinguisher."
"Your mother and me" should be "Your mother and I." For reference try taking our "your mother" - it sounds pretty silly to say "me thinks" unless you're in the 1600s, right? And it should be "think" instead of "thinks."
In this short story it is third person omniscient.
