No, maybe include some commas
If i could change something about myself, it would be, to accomplish things for myself rather than to pleasure others.
Calpurnia's cot shows how segregation is everywhere in Maycomb, including the Finch home.
We know that Aunt Alexandra has somewhere to sleep when she stays with them, suggesting that they have a spare bedroom. However, when Calpurnia stays with the Finches, she is not allowed to stay in the spare room.
Did you have any answer choices or was it free response?
free response: He should read more carefully and take notes on the important details.
