No, maybe include some commas
If i could change something about myself, it would be, to accomplish things for myself rather than to pleasure others.
Um, which summary?
If you're talking about this;
Read the summary of the section of "The Beginnings of the Maasai," where the volcanic eruption and its results are described.
As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. Enkai wanted to save his cattle. He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. The cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Neiterkob and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle.
Why does the summary need to be revised?
Then the answer is:
The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas
Answer:
A reader must read through the story and find the main events and make an educated guess.
Explanation:
I think. that's what i do soo
daddy chill mnnn jake pale hh
Answer:
write his name,his qualities,what he likes,where he works,what he brings for you,etc
Explanation:
please mark brainiest hope it works out for you
