the third one, if you add the comma without the when then you would have a comma splice (when you put a comma between 2 independent clauses without a conjunction) adding the when before Cynthia makes the first part a dependent variable and makes it okay to add the comma!
Hope this helps! :)
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You can write a fictional scene where a king is betrayed by his own son who wants to usurp the throne, and you can use a third-person point of view.
<h3>How to write a scene</h3>
To write this fictional scene, you must first decide what you want to write about. We can, for instance, think of a scene in which betrayal is involved. Therefore, the elements of the scene would be the following:
- Point of view: third person limited.
- Setting: 16th century, Iberian Peninsula, a castle.
- Characters: King Carlos and his son Prince Henrique.
- Conflict: character vs character. Prince Henrique has betrayed his own father.
An example of such a scene would be the following:
- "You?" the king's voice resonated, even though it sounded broken for the first time in his life. Prince Henrique's footsteps echoed in the hall as he walked towards his father, the cold stone walls of the throne room reverberating as if an earthquake were taking place with each step he took. Henrique shrugged, "I'm surprised you didn't see it coming, father." King Carlos could no longer stand. He fell back onto the throne, dropping his sword. Outside, he could hear the screams and the clashing, metallic sounds he knew so well. A battle was taking place, and man against man, sword against sword, violence reigned. Henrique unsheathed his own sword. "I do not wish to kill you, old man. Surrender already." Carlos reached for his own fallen sword and grasped its golden hilt. "I never thought I would have to murder my own son," he whispered. "But you are a traitor, Henrique, and no traitor shall remain alive."
The scene above is simply an example. Feel free to adapt it and add details.
Learn more about writing scenes here:
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We meet our narrator, who remembers his boyhood with his mother in the Middle Kingdom (or "China," if you don't want the Chinese to English translation) while his father worked in the Land of the Golden Mountain (the USA, "the demon land," etc.).We learn that the narrator's father is working overseas to earn money.The racial tension and violence in America is immediately addressed when we learn that the narrator's grandfather was lynched thirty years ago (1.1).The narrator's mother pulls the weight on the family farm in China. Her mad busy schedule also doubles as a convenient excuse to avoid the narrator's questions about his father and America.Not only is she busy with the chickens, the rice fields, and the pig, the narrator's mom also prays and burns incense for her husband in the village temple.We also learn that the narrator has never met his father. He and his mother cannot live in the Land of the Golden Mountain with his father because of political reasons both on the American front and the Chinese side. We learn that this affects many families, the narrator's being one.The narrator refers to his race of people as people of the Tang, not as Chinese (1.5). This specificity alludes to the long history of what we know as China and the multiple dynasties that have ruled its people.We learn that the narrator's mother and grandmother are illiterate, much like the majority of the people in their village. The family relies on the village schoolmaster to read and take dictation to write letters to Father. We learn that Father's letters arrive on a weekly basis (1.6).The narrator knows very little about his father, but he is thrilled by this one thing his mother has told him: his father makes amazing kites. Not like the kind you get for a couple bucks at the grocery store, mind you – but kites that "were often treasured by their owners like family heirlooms" (1.7).The narrator recounts moments when he and his mother would go out flying his father's kites. One of these kites was a swallow, an especially fast kite. Another was of a caterpillar.We learn that the narrator is seven years old (to an American catalogue of time); he shares that the Tang people include the gestation period of a baby as its first year, so by his count he's eight.Mother comes alive whenever the narrator and she go fly kites, chattering away about the times she and Father would go kiting together.Grandmother tells the narrator about the Land of the Golden Mountain, explaining that the name for the land abroad comes from the huge mountain there where gold is plentiful. She tells the narrator that "the demons" (that seems a fair way to refer to Americans, eh?) patrol the mountain and beat up anyone who does other than they're told (1.16).
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