The quality is good.
No passive voice.
In the beginning, it all began with Ralph Baer in 1967 in Nashua, NH. In 1966, while working for Sanders Associates Inc., engineer Ralph Baer began to investigate how to play games on TV. (add examples of investigations, don't add too much cuz it is gonna get too wordy)And as a result of his investigations Brown Box was created. According to the G-Phoria Legend Award, “Baer is considered "the Father of Video Games due to his many contributions to games and helping to spark the video game industry in the latter half of the 20th century”. Little did we know this great invention would be in everyone's life today.
I would say you should tell the reader some of the investigations he made, possibly some examples.
At the beginning of the story, Lizabeth is thinking of herself only, her town, her boredom, and her own rage.
Elizabeth says that destroying the marigolds is her last act of childhood because it leads her to finally comprehend the rationale behind Miss Lottie's seemingly cryptic habits. Through her new perspective, Elizabeth learns to refrain from superficial judgments, and she begins to have more empathy for other.
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fun stands for something exciting
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I'll be using the country I go by with a lot:
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France.</em></h2>
French people (most of them) are Christians. The festivals they know are:
Christmas Eve + Day (12/24 and 12/25) - Giving presents and such
Easter Day (04/09) - Going to church, seeing friends and family
Bastille Day (07/14) - Military parades and fireworks (kind of like the 4th of July in the USA)
Merci.
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Daintysword</em></h2>
