Answer:
passive voice:
The children enthralled us by delivering the marvelous performance.
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When I revise, I go through my paper and highlight all the mistakes that I can, using a different color for each kind. Then after I have done that, I just go through and fix them. It helps the revision go quicker and be more manageable.
Anger and pride hope this helps
Descriptive essay.
Descriptive essays rely on sensory and feeling words.