I says Why mania hid under the desk
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1. I suggest ending the "A time l got a great Victory was in Florida" Ending the sentence and starting a new one. Any number below ten should be written out. (Three not 3) Comma after so. And add apostrophe. (So, when we advanced to the championship it wasn't really easy.) Last sentence needs to be redefined. Does not make sense to say "we scored ended"?
2. Add spaces. (Obviously) How do you quietly storm out of a room? The adjectives do not make sense. He started to own? I suggest finding a better word.
3. Again, anything under ten needs to be written out. Confused by what this sentence means, "We had been going to a store to get some clothes in Greenbelt, and on the Beltway." Instead of 1 week and a half say a week and a half. I suggest saying the arm I broke, instead of that arm. Very good otherwise!!
4. I suggest cutting out everything that said you could not think of a triumph. It just confused the reader. The punctuation is also bad. Add more commas and get rid of the run-on sentences.
The correct answer among the choices given is the second option. <span>Living things use energy as the fuel for everything they do. It is in the form of chemical energy that living things use it. Loss of this energy is released as heat to the environment.
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Well the most rational thought would not to impulsively just go ahead and open the bakery when theres no money put into the company.
I could help, but I do not have paragraph seven. You can message me and i will be more than happy to email you and we can figure out a way for me to read paragraph 7.
