The affect is that this narrator wants people to understand that he isnt like any other jock in the school. He wants them to know that he is diffrent.
1. change they're to their
2. change an a
3. delete the comma after workhouse
4. add a comma after computer
5. change too to to
There should be more to this so I can answer question
Answer:
i dont know what do u want to write about
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