The commas would be here:
“For the picnic, she packed a blanket, bug spray, cheese sandwiches, plastic cups, and iced tea.”
Hope this helps:)
Hi there! I have no clue which Greg you're referring to, but I can give you some points on a thesis statement.
As you hopefully know, a thesis statement gives the reader a main idea of what the body paragraphs will be about. It doesn't have to be long-- usually it's one sentence and just gets straight to the point.
Here's a starter;
By the end of "(title of the story)", Greg changes into a (what he changed into) because of (idea of 1st paragraph), (idea of 2nd paragraph), and (idea of 3rd paragraph).
Hope I helped!
Words can mean so much more than images.
<span>Most people would run from a stranger that they believed to be the devil. The reason Tom Walker stays to converse with Old Scratch is the fault of his greed. Tom desires the treasure Old Scratch has promised him. Though Tom initially refuses the treasure to spite his wife, he eventually makes a deal with the devil after his wife is killed.</span>
Perseus was the king for on the day because A)he wants to return to Andromeda's homeland.
