Seems great. Try to keep it simple for people to understand.
Answer:
What about this position is most important?
What would you want to see me accomplish in the first six months?
How would you measure my success, and what could I do to exceed your expectations?
Explanation:
Answer:
All [of] the spa's pools ARE very hot. But, I still enjoyed my stay.
Explanation:
Not sure if of needs to be there. When things are plural they take the are form of is.
