Question

The human resources department is happy to announce a career development workshop. the workshop will be led by joseph pelletier. he has 20 years of experience in career development training. joseph will help you gain a clearer understanding of your career goals. he will also discuss tools to work toward your career goals. the workshop will take place november 10 and 11, it will start at 9:30
a.m. and end at 5:30 p.m. there will be coffee and tea, lunch will also be provided. respond to this e-mail to sign up. only 40 spaces are available. how could you improve this message? check all that apply.

Answer 1

Based on the question provided above, there are no choices provided and I have found a similar question that has its choices which are;

-          Use only complex sentences

-          Correct run-on sentences

-          Correct fragments

-          Use only simple sentences

-          Reduce sentence lengths

With the given choices, the correct answers are the following;

-          Correct run-on sentences – run on sentences should be corrected in order for the faulty sentences to be improved and revise as they contain two or more main clause or independent clause in which are being joined without any word to correct them and by this, it makes the readers confused.

-          Correct fragments – fragments should be corrected as these are sentences that are incomplete that makes the content of an information to lose its value as the information is incomplete.

-          Reduce sentence lengths – it is best to reduce sentence lengths so that the readers won’t find the reading material boring to read at and in the same time, make it more easy and attractive to read