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As my family and I walked through the line to receive our tickets, I felt an energy pulsing through me. I was so excited to be here. Adventure island! Ever since I could understand how much fun amusement parks were, I wanted to go. The commercials always drew me in. The rollercoasters, turning tea cups, and kids running around with rainbow ice-cream.
I almost couldn't stand still as the ticket lady wrapped the wristband around my left wrist. The bright green wristband read "Adventure Island", in bold black letters. At that point, it felt so real. I was finally here! After all these years of envying the families on the commercial.
Our first ride was on their tallest rollercoaster. As I board the ride, I remember how many times I've watched videos online of people riding this. It felt so exhilarating. When I get buckled into the seat, the attendant gives a thumbs up to the man controlling the ride, and I take off.
When I exit the ride, I feel this surge of energy. I'm so excited. There is one last thing I want to do before I leave though; get ice-cream. Rainbow twist with nuts and cherries. As I'm waiting in the line to buy my ice-cream I think of all the fun I had today, and how one day id love to take my family here.
I order my ice-cream and when I receive it, I walk to my family and leave the park with a smile on my face.
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