Question

What is the best revision of sentence 6 to maintain a formal style? moreover, students will benefit from having the most current information. its also worth mentioning that students will have access to new info. however, kids will also have access to some nice new information. not to mention that having loads of info is really good for students?

Answer 1

The best option which contains a sentence with a perfect grammar structure is : Moreover, students will benefit from having the most current information. This sentence in quite concise and includes only formal language. Formal style does not accept shortenings that you can see in the next option (info) and informal vocabulary (kids) that is placed in the third option.

Answer 2

A-Moreover, students will benefit from having the most current information.

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