You want us to write a whole narrative or just give u ideas of what to write about?? plz specify
To make a sentence more dazzling, you need to use more adjectives, active verbs, and basically present your readers with more information than just the dull sentence Nathan listened to music. It would be good to say what Nathan was like, what kind of music he listened to, why, etc. So, this could be your answer:
Having spent 8 hours at his boring job today, tired Nathan decided to spend some sweet time enjoying the melodic tunes of his favorite music genre ever.
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Well, our generation was born with the iPhone. This would lead all of us to have one of course. The events of which have happened obviously took a big chunk out of our lives, and most others didn't have that when they were 15-16. The culture however has changed. Ladies used to be expected to wear a dress and have manners. Now ladies wear ripped pants and graphic tees. I don't think affected is the word. I think we've completly changed. Other generations didn't have a TV, nor a phone. They had to play outside all the time. We just sit inside with our faces in our phones. We don't have to work as hard to get what we want. Hope that helps!
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