I like it I think you did great but the run on sentences could be shaped up a bit
PROMPT:
If I could choose any character from a movie or story I would choose addison from zombies, it is a disney movie. I think addison made an important choice because she showed her true self at the end of the movie realizing she shouldnt hide herself behind a wig, she also stood up for all of the zombies , its like what is going on now in the world with black lives, addison stood up for them and expressed what she beleived in and what was right! She is a bright girl who realized things were not perfect in her world and finally stood up for herself and zombies! I thought this was important because it was a brave choice and a relatable subject right now in our world! All lives matter, and in this movie she realized that and did something very incredible and important!
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The Deal- The Devil will give Tom the buried treasure, in return that one day he can claim Tom's soul.
The regret- He ends up going to church and becoming OBSESSED with the Bible and Church and Christianity, in hopes it will help, but sadly in the end, his deal was made and he did not escape the fate
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This will be a short answer to incorporate into the paragraphs. When I asked what happened they said that stocks started going down and started to crash and the whole stock shut down. They told me that it would not be great for the family because we would start to lose money.
Explanation:
What exactly is the story?
