The writer is considering changing the method of development used in sentences 4 and 5 (reproduced below) to provide a clearer l
ine of reasoning for the audience. The discovery was remarkable not only because of the cheese’s age and well-preserved state, but because of a new protein analysis performed on the cheese by chemist Enrico Greco at the University of Catania in Italy. This cutting-edge analysis allowed Dr. Greco to unlock the cheese’s contents and reveal new insights into life in ancient Egypt.
Should the writer use a different method of development in sentences 4 and 5 ?
The dress is said to have whispered. Dresses can not actually whisper, so it is personnification. Personification is taking an inanimate thing and giving it a human characteristic.
China originally planned to develop to what it called a Golden Shield surveillance system giving easy access to local,regional and national records of each citizen.
