i don’t know what this is but false i guess
Erm.... when you are officially accepted into the college.
I am pretty sure there is not
From the given sentences the sentence which does not fit into the option is that the outline should contain mixture of phrases, sentences and the words.
Explanation:
When we use to write a plan which contains the symbols the content to reveal the order the margin and the importance of the subject in the presentation is called as outline.
The outline which is written must link to the purpose it must contain the abstract of the message that one must deliver. There are important symbols and signals which must be considered in an outline. They must contain the parallel form and must margin signal importance.
The correct answer to this open question is the following.
Although you do not specify the travel destination you chose for your pitch, we can help you commenting different ideas so you can adapt them to your answer.
This would be the idea of the feedback.
My older brother told me the following things to improve my presentation.
Regarding writing(the brochure), I should use shorter sentences to transmit a more specific idea of the place to visit. He said that I spent too many lines writing about historical fats of the place, instead of fusing on the touristic attractions.
He said these ideas could be translated to my pitch because are similar. First, he told me that I should give a shorter introduction to focus on the tourist attractions. He said that introduction should take a couple of ideas and go directly to the beautiful places that attract tourists.
As my target audience was college students, he said that I should highlight the places that could cause more interest in this segmentation.
The last piece of advice he gave was to add more visuals to make the presentation more attractive. He said that many images could better attract the attention of the audience.
So what I did to rework my pitch based on the feedback was to rewrite the introduction, share some historic facts of the place, including fun facts, and then going directly to the tourist sites, restaurants, beaches, and nightlife, I discarded archeological sites and museums because that is not really what college students want to visit. I stay with the beaches, waterparks, and adventure sports. I finally add more pictures and a video clip at the end of my presentation.
